Thursday, April 15, 2010

Essay Reflection



Ideas and Content

In my writing so far, I have noticed both strengths and weaknesses. One of my weaknesses is that I have a lot of interesting ideas for my essay, but do not know how to organize them. The strengths are the ideas that construct on each other. I could improve in expressing ideas better by taking more time before the actual essay to organize paragraphs.

Organization

The organization of my Julius Caesar isn’t terrible, but it could have been better .To improve,I need to think more clearly on constructing paragraphs with my ideas. I started off with an interesting quote, which provokes tension in the reader’s view.My ending wasn’t quite as string as it could have been though,I could’ve put more taught into ending with a stronger paragraph.


SLR Reflection

The best SLR to describe my writing is Reasoning Critically , because you have to use this SLR when you construct your essay and add on to the main ideas. Also, you have to reason critically on putting the right words in your essay, which would evoke emotion in your readers.